2007年10月10日 星期三
The movie -- "色戒"
It was happen in last night, I went to the movie theater with my friend. We see the movie "色戒", it's produced from 李安. The movie is talking about the war of resistance against aggression and carry on a clandestine love. It involves lot of affection in mind. I think that everyone would has different emotion after seeing it. It's a good movie. I want to recommend it to you.
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Hi, Phoenix. I see that for the first period, you had six entries; that was from Sept. 23-Oct. 21st. Therefore, your grade would be 50% at the most. I will give more comments soon, but now we're in LIT2 class and I don't have time. Please use paragraphs instead of lists for the third period, if you want to do the third period. The director you mentioned is named Ang Lee in English. If you organize your blog into paragraphs, it will make more orderly sense and be easier to read. Avoid using two verbs together, too, as in "was happen" in the first sentence here,or "would has" near the end. Use parallel construction in paragraph 3 here. "Talking" doesn't match with "carry on"; it should be "carrying on".
Your grade for the first group will be 42.
Chris O'Brien
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